Assignment 22: Elevator Pitch No.3



I did not receive any feedback that made me want to change anything really because it was all positive. I think that there should be some negative feedback because my pitch and idea are not perfect.

What I changed is talking about the pricing of my app and how I could make money off of it. I think this is the part of my product that is a little shaky and needed to be addressed during the pitch. Other than that I tried to still include the hook as well as describing what the product was and it’s purpose.

Comments

  1. logansheffieldNovember 10, 2019 at 3:05 PM

    Hi Jonathan,

    I have commented on each of your pitches and you have gotten more consistent and thorough throughout this whole process. I think your idea is great and I think that if it actually became a thing, it would succeed. I think how you addressed the pricing and money aspect was smart for this go around. Nice job on elevator pitch number 3!

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  2. Benjamin NormanNovember 11, 2019 at 11:14 PM

    Hello Jonathan,
    Nice job on elevator pitch number 3 I think you did an excellent job on this one. I'm glad to see that you used the comments that were given to you to better improve this elevator pitch. I feel that you were more concise and that you were very well-spoken and you did well getting your point across.

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